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I want to be........
Contributed by
YouMakeMeThrowUp-A-Little
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Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 03:01:50 PM in AEST
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DreamsandWishes
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I want to be and astronaut,to pass the stars
I want to be a clown,just so i can fool around
I want to be you best friends,so i can be there when your down
I want to be your girlfriend,so we can remember all the good times together
I want to be you wife,for the rest of your life
I want to be dead,so i can erase all the bad memories from my head
But all i want is to be with you
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Re: I want to be........
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by paula_kay23 on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 04:00:09 PM AEST
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i think we all want to be something for at least a day, but the happiness is what we want for life.
i hope you dont think im being too forward by making a suggestion, but i think the last line would have more effect if you added some thing like 'but all i REALLY want', or 'the thng i want the most'
good poem though, really nice |
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Re: I want to be........
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by Summerwine on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 09:43:09 AM AEST
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| I think you nailed it, that of all the aspirations we have in life most of the time what really makes us happy is to be with those WE love. Sometimes we just need a reminder...thx...YVONNE |
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