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Seeds and Mirrors
Contributed by
overstated
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Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 01:40:29 PM in AEST
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I知 doing it all for you kid
You may be silent and isolated
But your voice is in me
You池e a star and I知 gonna make us big
I accepted the green paper
Acknowledged the receipts
I guess its wrong but
I値l wink all the way home
Like a piggy pig pig
Hogging all the food
Except I知 storing it all for you
I won稚 let the wolf blow through
I値l tell it with rhythm
In a powerful moment
You値l look down;
The floor spinning
I知 doing it all for you kid
I hope you understand
That without you
I値l throw away all these grand plans
Copyright ﾂｩ
overstated
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Re: Seeds and Mirrors
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by pixie on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 01:45:05 PM AEST
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excellent write..
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Seeds and Mirrors
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:05:18 PM AEST
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This was wonderful to read ..... interesting too....
Jenni |
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Re: Seeds and Mirrors
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 07:25:01 PM AEST
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Makes one think just how many stake their lives on success in this way. Very interesting,
Rita |
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Re: Seeds and Mirrors
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:00:24 AM AEST
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you have an excellent stlye for rhyming!
this is an amazing poem! i love how you've written it so much! |
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Re: Seeds and Mirrors
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 10:13:36 AM AEST
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| I felt tears in my eyes reading this. Great poem. |
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Re: Seeds and Mirrors
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:51:30 PM AEST
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Very good writing. I don't think there is any stronger Earthly luv than a parent for the child.
Someday this will be really appreciated.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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