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This Is My Last Poem To You
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 01:08:04 PM in AEST
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This poem to you will be my last,
As after this you’ll be part of my past,
I’m sick & tired of wondering why?
You don’t comfort me when I cry.
I doubt that this is for the best,
My pained heart needs quite a rest,
I really thought you cared for me,
But how stupid can one girl be?
I need to be held when I am hurt,
Not looked at like I belong in the dirt,
You think you know my pain, but you don’t,
I wish you would hug me, but you won’t.
In my past I have done bad things,
Are you my punishment disguised in dove’s wings?
If you are you have more than succeeded,
Your heartless service is no longer needed.
Do I really deserve all this?
Take the knife & give it one last twist,
So here is where my chapter ends,
It’s just a memory when you were my lover & friend.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-08-15 13:08:04]
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Re: This Is My Last Poem To You
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 01:24:37 PM AEST
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Now, I know you don't mean all this..... and I hope it will be your last sad poem about Mark.... so enjoy the day..and start some great new memories....
Happy 2 yr anniversary....
Luv and hugs
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Re: This Is My Last Poem To You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 01:37:24 PM AEST
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Well, Krissy, I am very sorry to hear you are having these problems. If you want to talk I am here.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: This Is My Last Poem To You
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 04:38:41 PM AEST
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I know it, too. My depression can make things very hard. I try to not infect others with it, but sometimes it can't be helped. I was very down yesterday, and today my hubby took me to a butterfly house. It cheered me so much. Sometimes just a little attention does the trick. Hang in there. I'm praying for you.
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Re: This Is My Last Poem To You
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 11:12:43 AM AEST
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Oh pixie, how gripping this is! What a moving emotional touching write. You really gave it your all, your feelings are very apparent. Though its a sad subject the poem thives in the topic & is excellently done.
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