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Are You One Of The Lucky Ones
Contributed by
Bruce
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Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:26:38 AM in AEST
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Are You One Of The lucky Ones
that have found their true love
The absolutely perfect partner
sent by the Lord above
Do you thank the Lord everyday
for sending them to you
To be by your side always
no matter what you do
How happy you have been
since the day you met
Every waking moment
not possible to forget
Even when you are sleeping
you feel the warmth within
You cannot wait for the next day
to arrive and begin
How lucky the two of you are
to be blessed with such a life
You with a wonderful husband
and he with a perfect wife
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-08-15 05:26:38]
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Re: Are You One Of The Lucky Ones
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by corrupted_minds on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:29:33 AM AEST
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This is really cute, I'm not one of the lucky ones.. and i wish i was. Nice write.
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Re: Are You One Of The Lucky Ones
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:40:24 AM AEST
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| A quite enjoyed this simply stated verse, about love given away. In many ways, giving love away is the ultimate love. You display this with a simple one's passion and courage. Well done! |
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Re: Are You One Of The Lucky Ones
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by inoc on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 06:20:58 AM AEST
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I love this poem.....
thanks for writing it Bruce!
expecially....
the second paragraph ...it really means a lot to me...it relates to me and my wonderful hubby!
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Re: Are You One Of The Lucky Ones
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by Archie on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 06:22:26 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. there is alot of wisdom to this poem |
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Re: Are You One Of The Lucky Ones
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 10:15:52 AM AEST
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What a lovely poem...
I think I can safely say I am one of the lucky ones....(After 25 yrs of marriage)....and still some sparks there..
Another good write from the Prince Of Romance!!
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Re: Are You One Of The Lucky Ones
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by Stew on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:16:58 PM AEST
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i like this one. great write.
love forever
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