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Daddy wouldnt rape me
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:22:55 AM in AEST
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I hear a little voice echo,
The screams saying “please no more”
But her father threw her to the floor,
He pinned her down and rapped her,
And hit her if she squealed,
Scars she had from month’s before still hadn’t healed,
She learnt just to take it, he took her childhood,
She grew up different from others, she never understood,
When he was done he got up and left,
He said that he’d kill her mum,
If she dared tell anyone,
She told herself "daddy wouldn't rape me"
His just teaching me about life,
and what I'd do if i became a wife,
She told herself "daddy wouldn't rape me"
Daddy loves me so,
But there was alot this little girl didn't know,
That daddy was perverted,
Daddy was sick in the head,
He'd do anything to get his daughter into bed,
He not only raped her phyically,
Emotionally he screwed her too,
But when he did the dity he didnt have a clue,
He stole away her virginity,
Her life has gone up in mist,
It’s all gone, she’s lonely and torn and now she cuts her wrist,
She cuts them just a little,
So alive she still may be,
But so the pain he made runs free,
But today the young girls completed,
She cried “ He’d ***** with me no more”,
As she closed the bathroom door,
She cleft the blade in deep,
And fallen into a lasting sleep,
Bloodstained floors, and bloodstained walls,
Mark where this young girls falls,
Crimson blade for him to see,
His little ***** she’d never be,
There he cannot harm her,
There he cannot touch her,
No longer will he haunt her dreams,
No loner will he abuse her,
Sleep in peace girl, you now are free,
But I hate to say this young girl’s me
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 06:07:39 AM AEST
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dunno wat to say about this 1. But as you said it is deep.
good work
love always, dizza
xoxoxox |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by DrogedaRain on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 07:02:15 AM AEST
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| May God help you through your pain as he did mine. Death is not the answer~! |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 07:40:12 AM AEST
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Deep does not even begain to scratch the serface. Very well done, vivd, as if I was there. You have much talenet, see what happens when I leave, newer better poets arrive *sigh*
The job I've chose
The Life I live
The angst I carry
To this Korean prairie
New poets come down
New poets coem in
Out from the darkness
Underneat my skin
congrats and welcome. |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by pixie on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 07:46:46 AM AEST
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wow, this was very moving and so deep, I am so sorry as I read I was hoping this wasn't you *hugs you*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Suzume_B on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:01:46 AM AEST
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| I am soo sorry your father was such a sick man. I use to be a cutter from the pain my father gave, he never rapped me physically, but he hurt me none the less. Great poetry |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:16:41 AM AEST
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| Deep indeed....don't know what to say. |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 11:21:31 AM AEST
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There are some people out there is you poem proves, How the **** can people do stuff like that?
Harsh and deep you have talent for awakening the mind to the sickness in our world.
Excellent write and well done. |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Solnubis on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 12:36:25 PM AEST
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| I could relate to the feeling different. Unfortunately ther are sick people in this world. However I know for a fact no and i mean no one it worth taking your life. I think I like you just don't want to feel the feeling that come up. Let me tell you feelings will not harm you but cutting yourself can. Yes the feelings may hurt but they eventually pass. But if you cut yourself too deep you risk the chance of not coming out of it and your worth having a life. Take care and i hope you getting help. Sexual abuse is a very devastating event in anyone life and so hard to understand. |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Hakiokusaken on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 01:49:16 AM AEST
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That was real good and I hope it didn't really happen.
~ HAKIOKUSAKEN~ |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by cj_ranson on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:39:45 AM AEST
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Like dylan said, I dont know what too say, but it was deep, real deep
Cj
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:48:39 AM AEST
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the whole thing made me sick to my stomach... i don't know what to say.
i was abused in the past. over a period of 3 years and it was by my older brother... and when the truth funally came out he just denied it, and then he GOT AWAY WITH IT! since thee was no evidence... so i ways i do under stand you, even though our stories don't match.
... so if you ever want to talk PM me. |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Ronald on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:24:31 AM AEST
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| It's deep and it's a good poem. The only problem is I felt uncomfortable about the suicide thingy. I never believe suicide is a solution. But anyway, it';s still ok. keep up the good work |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Row on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:16:50 AM AEST
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| well i guess if this is true then i'd feel sorry for you, but if it isnt , then you've really just gone too far. |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 04:48:58 AM AEST
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stomach turning and really upsetting. there are so many twisted evil people in the world. i am so so sorry for your suffering and pain and am glad that you have not acted on this poem because like somebody already said death is not the answer.
this was well written, good flow and powerful chioce of words. |
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Re: Daddy wouldnt rape me
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:08:35 PM AEST
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i have to agree with DrogedaRain.
this poem was real deep.but i know for a fact that
your death shouldnt come by suicide
catz77 |
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