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Blue, Black and pink
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 12:47:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Paint my body blue, black and pink,
throw me a rope, cos I’m starting to sink,
Was alive, but dead in a blink,
And now I’m gone your starting to think,
Darkness it covers, illusions they hide,
Took advantage of me whenever I cried,
In the shadows i lost my pride,
Where you left me alone I died,
This painful place has made me kneel,
I tried to buy, but I had to steal,
You say I had your love but I no longer feel,
There is no God, no need to pray,
When I’m out of this hell, rapture I’ll stay,
Dreamed about this just the other day,
My eyes aren’t blind, but all I see is grey,
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Re: Blue, Black and pink
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:49:42 AM AEST
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good work. Very nice, a rope is here all you gotta do is
catch it
love always, dizza
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Re: Blue, Black and pink
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 03:09:55 AM AEST
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Very sad but u say it all well.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Blue, Black and pink
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by inoc on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 08:56:17 AM AEST
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Not a bad poem at all
I find some times I'm itching to submit a poem and I can't think, theres nothing there!...
so...
if you felt like that when you submitted this poem WELL...
you did a terrific job,,,
heaps better than what I could 'think up"
that's for sure...
cheers
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Re: Blue, Black and pink
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by cj_ranson on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:34:01 AM AEST
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great work
Cj |
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Re: Blue, Black and pink
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:40:21 AM AEST
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this has excellent uses of words and phrases!
great job!
from deathdrop. |
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