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frozen tears.
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:17:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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a single tear drop
lingers on my eye.
frozen from the shock
lingering on my eye.
the single drop of hate
the single drop of fate
frozen on my eye.
more frozen tears, begin to form
as i chase the memories
through the storm
of endless frozen tears.
sitting in my eyes
shocked from my own lies.
shocked from your own lies.
the pain burns deep
from these frozen tears
that just wont seep.
refusing to give up.
lingering on my eyes.
still and patient
avoiding silent crys.
something starts to warm my eyes
my tears are about to flood
its your voice again
"im sorry for the lies"
i loose the war with my own tears
frozen they are not
you dry my eyes
we say our goodbyes.
it was love
i guess
i thought.
but suddenly im empty
a single tear drop
lingers on my eye
frozen...
why i ask
just why?
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bttrflynajar
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2004-08-14 23:17:32]
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Re: frozen tears.
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by silverjade on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:23:27 PM AEST
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that poem was really good
i can feel it
so much feeling in it
its awesome |
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Re: frozen tears.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:48:28 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching sad but written with powerfull feelings the ring out beautifully even in it's sadness.
Great work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: frozen tears.
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by Fmdodge on
Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 02:02:43 PM AEST
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| It's very deep! I can feel your lost... Nicely done |
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