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Forsaken
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:04:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Forsaken
Taking it out on me
Having no idea what to believe
You think it's me
That's against you indignantly
It isn't as it seems
I have no idea what to believe
Hard to trust what you can't see
This is the reason without feeling
Trusting equals breaking
And because of it I'll be forsaken
To live in the past moments
Remembering the pain from it
Living shattered and broken
Till time can mend the pieces
That was left from all of this
My heart breaks apart
From the very start
Leaving a fatal scar
Upon my heart
All because of trust
And its faults
Copyright ©
Essentially9
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2004-08-14 23:04:02]
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Re: Forsaken
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:33:49 PM AEST
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| excellent poem |
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Re: Forsaken
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:46:06 AM AEST
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| well done,good write. |
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Re: Forsaken
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by skyblumoon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:47:58 AM AEST
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Pure power woderful write.
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Re: Forsaken
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by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 02:06:33 PM AEST
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Very deep and powerful.
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