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Obesity
Contributed by
solnubis
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:04:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Removed from society
As a dismal blob of propriety
Everywhere you are seen
Heard and discussed
As a driven force of gluttony.
Where there is no
compassion or symphony,
just a sigh of relieve.
When out of sight
where society does not
have to stand there in fright.
Facing the fear of knowing they can be me.
However I wishing I we’re them.
Copyright ©
solnubis
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2004-08-14 22:04:51]
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Re: Obesity
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 11:13:35 AM AEST
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| Great subject! Society is not looking at the person on the inside and they are judging because they themselves fear it could happen to them given the right circumstances; depression, disease, genetics, or simply a case of eating the wrong stuff for one's metabolism... |
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Re: Obesity
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by MsScissors on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:42:26 AM AEST
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| Outstanding rhyme. the only cliche I see is sight and fright. usually i detest external ryhme structure, but you have done an excellent job of maintaining freshness. a perceptive and couragous poem. |
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Re: Obesity
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by kailadragon on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:31:06 PM AEST
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| i love this poem...i'm obese, but i try not to let it get me down......i love this, i really do... |
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