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A Week Till 12
Contributed by
amos
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Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
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A week till #12
A lateral movement towards a year older
A week of unforgettable terms
A week that left me in depression
The week our heavenly Father left me out in the cold
That week I heard it
the news I didn't want to hear
I was so close to her
Now shes gone
They were both
gone in the same
Why?
You ask why I do not believe
Well this is why.
He stole the love
he ***** over my teenage years
Why?
So I tell you I do not believe
I do not have to believe
I believe in myself
for I'm not the one who took them away.
I will remain neutral
I have no second thoughs
Regardless of the peer word
I simply shrug at the notion
But the truth is, I don't need him.
For he didn't need them.
I turned 12.
I had no grandly parents
I wish to not confuse you
I do have my parents
But my parents
did not have theres
They never saw..
..me enter a new life
They will never see
..me end and begin.
Only I will see..
..what I do.
Copyright ©
amos
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2002-11-01 01:00:00]
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Re: A Week Till 12
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by norticus on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:04:23 AM AEST
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| Ludicrous concept. I laughed all the way through as I considered that somebody actually cared whether you believe in God or not. You drive the car to whatever destination you choose. I give it a 3.6 on the Nortiscale because it made me laugh. |
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Re: A Week Till 12
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:27:11 AM AEST
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| i love this write. Being a beliver myself i do care weather or not you belive but it is your choice. Keep the poems comming! And i am so sorry for you pain. |
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Re: A Week Till 12
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by Phildel on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:31:13 AM AEST
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This is undoubtedly a very passionate and fierce poem, you express your emotions on the subject very well.
thanks for the read,
Phildel |
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Re: A Week Till 12
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by amos on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 04:13:26 AM AEST
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| I would hope you are not laughing at the death of someone, Norty. |
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Re: A Week Till 12
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by LJ on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:54:44 AM AEST
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| well written. I am sorry that you had to experience this pain. I too as a believer care whether you believe. I guess the biggest question I have is....If you don't believe in God, how can you say that he took your grandparents away? Just curious. |
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Re: A Week Till 12
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by amos on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 10:45:44 AM AEST
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| I used to before their deaths. I would attend all the time..but never again. |
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Re: A Week Till 12
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 07:35:10 AM AEST
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Hun, life and death is just a part of life. You have to accept that. Everything is in a bigger picture. You can't blame God because something happened that deprived you of your grandparents. It's part of having free will on Earth. No one can live forever no matter how much you want them to. It's scientifically impossible if you want to look at it that way. I hope that you reconsider your standing with God. When we are in pain, we tend to lash out at those closest to us. You can't let that same pain dictate the rest of your life. Is that what your grandparents would have wanted for your future? Hugs!
Ginnie |
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