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the dream
Contributed by
Gabriel
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:07:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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my djinn; we fell to the ground
in that overcast hall.
and, oh! it was sound
to my lips worlds away.
now the taste of this echo
revives me from bliss.
and, my! these bars are sweet
to pin me to my head.
Copyright ©
Gabriel
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2004-08-14 19:07:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:40:54 AM AEST (User
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short, yet i was intwinded in the imiagry. very nicly done once more. |
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