|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Dying For the Death That Has Already Happened
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 03:50:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Is it weird that I shall see
Your face left dying inside of me
The eyes of the innocent
Left hungry for life
A mind left working
Now dead from disease
A cry so sudden
Left making me shiver
My cup is filled
It tips and drips down the table
Left spilt water
Diseased
Not pure
Unloved
And left dying
For the death that has already happened to me
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
... [
2004-08-14 15:50:08]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Dying For the Death That Has Already Happened
(User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 05:23:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I liked this a lot, it was very well written and unique.
Katie |
|
|
Re: Dying For the Death That Has Already Happened
(User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 05:49:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I enjoyed reading this aswell!! your words flowed Beautifully |
|
|
Re: Dying For the Death That Has Already Happened
(User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 10:59:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is a great poem...excellent job
I'm glad you like my poem thanx for commenting
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
P.S. im not a dude im a girl....lol |
|
|
Re: Dying For the Death That Has Already Happened
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:20:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Impressive. You have brought me into your world, I must thank you, I beleive that I will like it here. If you'll be excusing me now, I must go and read more. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
