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Adrianna - Part II
Contributed by
Knowledge
on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I used to believe we could just be friends.
It is not possible for you and me.
People think I obsess.
People think I care too much.
All want is caress.
All you want is a little too less.
Friends we once were.
My thoughts were known to you
And you gave it not a thought.
Because of that, I am naught.
Ever since I've known you,
I've seen through your eyes,
Tasted through your lips,
Felt with your heart.
Now I want it all back.
I want back what is mine,
What was given to me.
I want my life.
Something has come between us.
I've always understood what you said. I've always understood what anyone said. I know too much for someone my age. That's why you come to me.
You are in need of comfort and no one but me is near.
Offering you a hand,
I come to you as a dear.
But you say your feelings for me are just too bland.
Pushing me away
Will never keep your night terrors away.
Seeing you in pain
Begins to make me strain.
Still one holds you in thrall,
And now I begin to stall.
I know I don't have a chance,
But hear me out.
Without you I fall into a trance.
I close my eyes,
Bringing to mind a vision of you.
I cast everyone aside.
I seclude myself, thinking only of you.
In my trance I feed the seed I have planted.
But in doing so I lose more of myself the longer I go on.
The seed begins to eat me.
My body is gone.
I hope to God the love I gave it
Will be enough to feed the sapling I left behind.
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Knowledge
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2002-10-31 23:00:00]
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Re: Adrianna - Part II
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:20:38 AM AEST
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| read both part 1 and 2, good job, I hope whoever it is knows how much you really care for them, life is to short for it all drifts away to fast, |
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Re: Adrianna - Part II
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:34:17 AM AEST
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Read both, agree with Val, on this one!
Both were really touching! Christina |
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Re: Adrianna - Part II
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by norticus on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:06:59 AM AEST
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| It's ok. I give it a 3 on the Nortiscale |
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Re: Adrianna - Part II
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by crucifixioncross on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:15:44 AM AEST
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ya you pointed out some of the well i guess you could say linked part from 1 to 2, im not sure if everyone noticed so ill point out one...the first one says he never wants anything to come between them and in the second one he says "Something has come between us. " and im pretty sure there are others but anyways good just knowledge and yes i wouldnt mind seeing a third keep em up
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