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Remember
Contributed by
Poe
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Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 02:25:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Remember me, do you?
When amity meant more than lust
Remember us, will you?
When I began to trust
Remember why, if you will
I can no longer divulge in your voice
Remember how, if you can still
It was not loss by death, but by your conscious choice
Push me away, brush me aside, and clear your path of me
But what you can’t forget,
What you try not to see;
You do remember me…
When I remember you
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Poe
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2004-08-14 14:25:53]
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Re: Remember
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 02:47:43 PM AEST
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This caused my face to twist up. I know this pain, and I could almost cry for you. I think this is harder than death. With death, there is the final acceptance of what has been taken, with this there are always questions.
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Re: Remember
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by TwEeK on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:17:22 PM AEST
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awsome! i liked this alot!
i can relate to your poem...
"Push me away, brush me aside, and clear your path of me" i loved this line!
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Re: Remember
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:08:23 PM AEST
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this was written very interrestingly. I'm not
sure what to say except that i enjoyed this. I
like your username as well :).
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