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Adrift In Dreams
Contributed by
mdmorash
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 01:30:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Adrift in dreams I see your eyes,
Your flowing tears for me baptize.
I touch the breeze and feel your pain,
But though I try I’ve not to gain.
You’re lost to me I realize.
I see you there though in disguise,
And wonder at your long goodbyes.
But from your world I must abstain,
Adrift in dreams.
For when I tried you told me lies,
Your sullen smiles and short replies.
You brought these storms, the rage of rain,
While blind to all you could obtain.
You’re lost once more amid you skies,
Adrift in dreams.
© 2004
Michael David Morash
All rights reserved
Copyright ©
mdmorash
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2004-08-14 13:30:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Adrift In Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheSchroedmeister on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 01:32:28 PM AEST (User
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This poem has a killer rythym, it flows very well
Great write |
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Re: Adrift In Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 01:52:44 PM AEST (User
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A good write... I enjoyed this...
Jenni |
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Re: Adrift In Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 02:18:41 PM AEST (User
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Good write michael. good use of imagery.the 5-4 setup was a little different, but still a good write. |
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