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Let Me Go
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
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Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 01:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You'll never come back
No matter how hard I try
You've left me here in the dark
To decay in the moisture of my tears
I don't have anymore to give
There's nothing for you to take
Although you never did
However I wanted something from you
I'll give back all the things you gave me
It will help to ease my pain (or make it worse)
My body aches with a thought of you
Why did you let me go?
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RhythmBndt
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2004-08-14 13:29:25]
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Re: Let Me Go
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:41:31 AM AEST
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I'm so very sorry, This was so sad and forlorn. I wish I could answer that question for you........Why did you let me go?
If this happening to you right now......I pray things are better.
I can't stand to see you sad.
Your poem was excellent
Love
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Re: Let Me Go
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by Lips on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:40:27 AM AEST
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I love that "Why did u let me go ?"
You know i recently had that thought myself ...and i also thought why did u give up on me so soon!
Wish u well in ur endevours ..thankyou for the write |
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