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the room
Contributed by
spider
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:32:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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A room
So black
So bright
So light
It blinds.
This room
So dark
And yet
It burns
My eyes
The room
Is you
So dark
You shine
Inside
Copyright ©
spider
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2004-08-14 11:32:40]
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Re: the room
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitMyst on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:02:23 PM AEST
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| I absolutely LOVE the concept behind this poem! "So dark, it blinds." I lack for words at the moment, but in it's short and simpleness, it's really, really, really good--and thought provoking. :) Thank you for this. |
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Re: the room
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by darkplaidbabe on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:25:58 PM AEST
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wow im...speechless. this poem is incredibly different and unique! beautiful write!
Brynna |
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Re: the room
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by Adam_me2 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:22:50 AM AEST
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| very unique and simple, good write.. |
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