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The Numbers Game*
Contributed by
Glo
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Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:29:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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One...Two...what's wrong with you?
You vowed to me you would always be true,
Now you're always gone leaving me blue
Stepping on my heart, like a worn out shoe.
Three...Four...my heart hit the floor...
I've had enough of this
I'm not taking it anymore,
Time for the broken hearted to even the score.
Five...Six.. to late, it can't be fixed...
Should have thought about it
While you were in the mix...
Running from pillar to post, between and betwixt.
Seven...Eight...way to late...
Having way to many Sweeties on your plate,
No more tears for me,
Time to set the record straight.
Nine...Ten...I just met a new friend...
My broken heart is now on the mend.
Guess what? The very same thing happened to him,
Time for us to start living again.
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Two is a very good number!
~Gloria E. 14-August-2004
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Glo
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2004-08-14 11:29:29]
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Re: The Numbers Game*
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by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:15:44 PM AEST
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I liked your flow and this verse: "Running from pillar to post, between and betwixt.".I'm living the numbers 1 through 6 and am patiently waiting for to enter 10!Great write Glo,
PumpkinPie
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Re: The Numbers Game*
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by darkplaidbabe on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:20:13 PM AEST
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this is very unique and interesting. very creative! nice flow you got going, it all just seems to fit nicely. awesome write!
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Re: The Numbers Game*
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 01:46:26 PM AEST
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Great write..I loved this...
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Re: The Numbers Game*
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 03:27:18 PM AEST
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| This is a great write, Glo. I think it does happen to all of us at least once. Yes, it did happen to me when I was very young. Thank goodness I finally found the right man. |
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