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Eternal Hell
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:02:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Another night in Hell again…
Breathlessly, I wait in anticipation for the dance…
Cold hands caress my neck, as the curtain goes up…
Darkness calls my name…
Entranced by splendiferous beauty, unable to move…
Fear swells in me as Death’s hands tighten around my neck…
God is the legend forgotten; belief is a sin…
Howling out their mournful song…
"I am one, I am all, yet I am no one…"
Joyless and morbid, the poet still sits, uninspired…
Keeping demented thoughts and feelings inside…
Loneliness mocks me, makes me touch it.
Masochistic pain brings me comfort…
Nothingness consumes me, drowns me with its force…
Ominous clouds fill my head, spreading like a disease…
Pain setting in my bones like a cancer; eating my flesh, tormenting my soul…
Rays of moonlight reach for my hand, guiding me away…
Starless nights, rainbows of sadness shine on me…
Tunnel-like visions, never-ending, darkness embarks…
Unspoken whispers uttered to the ungraceful moon…
Vital forces begin accelerating in flight past the outer Universe…
While I float here, in a sea of blood, cried from the fallen ones…
Xtry dreams, dark, erotic, passionate; incomparable gratification…
You fade into the dark, a mirage of my mind, my creation…
Zenith pours into my coarse lips, as Death laughs in triumph; I have surrendered...
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FleurdeSang
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2004-08-14 11:02:12]
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Re: Eternal Hell
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by kyletycz on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:39:24 AM AEST
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Very interesting, not sure if i understand what you were trying to get at for most of it, or if it was meant to have an underlying point, but it was good none the less
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Re: Eternal Hell
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:49:29 PM AEST
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| the style is complex and thought - thru - i think the inner core of this poem is very powerful a lovely decriptive poem FleurdeSang. |
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Re: Eternal Hell
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:41:40 PM AEST
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Quizically Pondering the absence of Q.
What a fantastic poetry format and idea. A-Z Magnificent !!!
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