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Our First Born
Contributed by
inoc
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Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 08:52:23 AM in AEST
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sweet bright eyes
we realise
your winded smile is the beginning
to a loving world
your born into
nothing can stop us grinning
your skin is so clean and soft
we can't believe your ours
your daddy's holding
your tiny fingers
and your not even born an hour
your so beautiful in our arms tonight
we'll treasure this precious moment
memories of you are an honour
your sweet face is a pretty comment
you have all the winning charms
loving you with a deep respect
we think we are very lucky
to be the proud parents
with no regrets
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-08-14 08:52:23]
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Re: Our First Born
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 08:57:18 AM AEST
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It's a very beautiful poem.
She's so lucky to have you as parents!
And you are such a talented poet!
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Re: Our First Born
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 09:00:45 AM AEST
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*Sigh*....Beautiful poem.....
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Re: Our First Born
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by pixie on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:18:06 AM AEST
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awwwwww such a beautiful write, *hugs*
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Re: Our First Born
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:09:10 PM AEST
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There is nothing more beautiful than a newborn babe. There is such hope and beauty lying there in your arms. Precious bundles of love that take your heart forever.
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Re: Our First Born
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:24:27 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem! And even to this day she is deeply treasured...She is very lucky to have such wonderful parents such as you.This was such a lovely piece to read,thank you for sharing,
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