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What's That Light In The Night!?
Contributed by
inoc
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:13:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Beautifil light
in the night
the stars are shining
oh so bright
today the sun was scorching
yet tonight the moon's sincere
it has a calming effect
on the beautiful trees
oh they're usually
are so clear!
looking closley now
there's a firm glaze
-ahead
car lights
are shining towards us
coming closer
- fast
now a smell
of burning
-smoke
and disaster
oh the forest
[not the forest!]
the guilty car
quickly passes
oh !
what the cigarette butt
-masters
why does natural
innocent nature
-have to suffer
with this
popular torcher
of the
uncaring humans
they are dangerous
-scourchers!
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-08-14 07:13:44]
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Re: What's That Light In The Night!?
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by x_midnight_x on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:18:11 AM AEST
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| i liked this piece its good to remind of the dangers of bush fires being started so easily with a cigarette butt,a good write that keeps us refreshed in awareness,blessings :) |
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Re: What's That Light In The Night!?
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:43:58 PM AEST
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Good write....great message..
Jenni |
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Re: What's That Light In The Night!?
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:43:59 PM AEST
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Good write....great message..
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Re: What's That Light In The Night!?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:12:55 PM AEST
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I live out in the country and I know this dread. Hot and dry days seem to call the uncaring or unaware smoker to our area. Seems more fires are started in our area this way than any other. Sad people are so careless.
Rita |
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