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Perfect Love
Contributed by
cj_ranson
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 05:08:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lovin You
Best feeling, nothin else I can do
Old hurts healing
With the love of a girl
Without her, I woud fall
But now I can stand, stand tall
I was lost
Didn't know where to be
But now I have been set free
I see a love
I see a girl
I see a life infront of me
Where would I be, Without her
Blue sky's every day
I can see everything in every single way
Coz I love you
I was weak
I couldn't see ahead
Now im strong
Now theres nothing wrong
Perfect Love
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Re: Perfect Love
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by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 05:33:34 AM AEST
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: ) .. like i always say in love poems, wish some guy could write this about me.
love always
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Re: Perfect Love
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by inoc on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 05:52:17 AM AEST
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I read it once and thought...ok....
then I re read it and wow it's so inspiring!
--what a lot one girl does when love is powerful!!
[so the moral of the story is if you think it is ok
re read it and it prob. will hit you in the face!???]
so..
yes I did enjoy reading it
cheers! |
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Re: Perfect Love
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 08:28:23 AM AEST
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Lovely write..... Ain't Love Grand!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Perfect Love
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by Freda_Burrel on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 09:08:06 AM AEST
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| great poem, love? what a blast |
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