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YOU
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:16:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i miss your hugs,
the way you kiss.
its something so wonderful,
i truly miss.
enjoyment in time,
well spent with you.
you show me pleasure,
with what you do.
you captured my heart,
with your sexy smile.
introducing your love,
in such a style.
the way you hold me,
is beyond compare.
your hugs and kisses ,
i truly find there.
stuck in that moment,
in time with you.
enjoying these pleasures,
by what you do
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freda_burrel
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2004-08-14 00:16:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: YOU
(User Rating: 1 ) by heartquake on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:43:37 AM AEST (User
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This is kind of random, but I've always loved the rhyming of smile and style, it just seems to flow a lot better than most rhymes... I loved the poem too, not just that rhyme lol... I'm a closet romantic so my heart has always been with love poems and lost love poems, and this is one of the better that I've read in a while |
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