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Dreams
Contributed by
lowman613
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:53:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fallen hopes and dreams,
casting a shadow down stream,
only for you to dream some more,
let the mind open & explore,
follow the stars that shine,
and learn to just unwind,
dreams come from within,
not a game to win,
try to fullfill that special glow,
and look forward in to tomorrow,
dont let your dreams be fallen ones,
shine high like the rising sun,
Cast them high,
as though you could fly,
one day they will come true,
and you'll be proud of it too!
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lowman613
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Re: Dreams
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by inoc on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 06:00:03 AM AEST
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I really enyojed this poem
powerful and positive
keep it up!
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Re: Dreams
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 06:11:10 AM AEST
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nice, happy and positive I like that
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Re: Dreams
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:11:13 AM AEST
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Terrific poem full of positive words loved it
Love Sweetangelukxxxxxx |
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:25:55 PM AEST
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I love this, Christina. The only way to make sure your dreams come true is to keep working until you make it happen. I wish all parents would instill this in their children.
Rita |
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Re: Dreams
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 12:35:41 AM AEST
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very beautiful and inspiring.
I like when you say "shine high like sun"..
thanks Christina.. venkat |
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Re: Dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:31:30 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written.... Great advice also....
Jenni |
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Re: Dreams
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:04:59 AM AEST
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Positive filled with hope and faith!
This was simply lovely Christina, filled with grace!
Never stop dreaming, for a man without a dream soon dies!
Lovely thoughts....I likes it alot!
Warm hugs
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Re: Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:09:17 PM AEST
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awww christina, this is beautiful! so positive and filled with hope:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dreams
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 02:42:08 AM AEST
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Very touching. I loved it....
Very special. |
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