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No Going Back
Contributed by
wray
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:49:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Beneath this radiant space of blue,
as faces laugh and the stars weep dust,
I think of you.
In a world that lives with immortal ease;
yet a pain unfolds with the lives it holds;
stagger to my knees.
This blade can rupture so many hearts
but a fine line drawn is a
red-rained dawn
in clarity; your sweet words spawned
love’s fractured parts.
To long for hate that lingers still.
You see in me, but let me be;
I lost the will;
you lost in me;
your faith in me now trembles still.
Too many fights lost long ago,
too many heartbeats
stammered in
a freezing cold.
My hope was bold;
but we both lost this fight too
long ago.
Copyright ©
wray
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2004-08-13 23:49:31]
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Re: No Going Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:13:13 AM AEST
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| Interesting flow. Great poem! |
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Re: No Going Back
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 07:47:47 PM AEST
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*is very, very, very impressed*
I've read some amazing poems today, but this one is definitely among the best . . . possibly THE best. Beautifully written. I'll most definitely be checking out more of your work in the future. Post more and I'll certainly read it :).
still impressed,
Nora |
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Re: No Going Back
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:45:21 AM AEST
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| Another masterwork from a master poet. |
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