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The White Rabbit
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:47:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Time drops down an unseen thread
Generated from a baby's first breath
It dissipates too quickly into a hole
we don't quite know how to
get into.
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Avarice_Riot
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2004-08-13 23:47:21]
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Re: The White Rabbit
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 09:46:22 AM AEST
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Childhood is surely fleeting, but are we sure we want to know what lies waiting in that hole?
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: The White Rabbit
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 01:46:25 AM AEST
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Quite an apt description of time I would say... that rabbit that is ever in front of us but we can never quite catch up with...we are all rather like Alice then from 'Alice in Wonderland'.. ha ha ha chasing time... chasing time... Nicely done I'll say.
"I'm off to chase my white rabbit...good luck with yours..."~ Words spoken by the Hermitic Crab. |
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Re: The White Rabbit
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:20:59 AM AEST
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Very meaningful....
Good write...
Jenni |
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Re: The White Rabbit
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by venkat on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:18:48 AM AEST
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| A meaningful write..Good observation. venkat |
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Re: The White Rabbit
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by Spike on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:36:47 AM AEST
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I like the allusions as well. A faint hint of a haiku-like feel in the observation. Nice, succint reflection on aging and the mysteries of where our time goes.
Spike |
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Re: The White Rabbit
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:36:32 AM AEST
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The yet unsolved mystery of time, caught into edging words. Well done!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: The White Rabbit
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:45:24 PM AEST
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Short but powerfull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The White Rabbit
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:14:50 AM AEST
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| Very introspectic, and yet so true of us all. |
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