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Existing
Contributed by
BlazeingHeart
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:21:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Standing in the middle of the room
I feel like i am in the middle of a desert
A snake slithers around my ankel.
Slides around my neck
And looks me in the face and says
'Why are you here when you belong with me?'
A dagger appears in my hand in a burst of smoke
'Take this and use it to come ot where you belong, you will never be alone again.'
I take the dagger
And stab myself in the heart, happy to not be alone.
Meet the snake in the afterlife
'Welcome,' and raps me in a cloak
'You don't have to worry anymore'
I fall into death's embrace
Content to never leave
And fall unconcious.
Not knowing why I did not live life to the fullest
Now I will never know what I oculd have been or could have done
Alone rapped in a cload
Without a future or a past
Just exisiting.
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BlazeingHeart
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2004-08-13 21:21:25]
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Re: Existing
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:15:00 PM AEST
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This poem had quite an awesome flow to it.
It put forth some powerful images, and had me actually enjoying the tale within your words.
Well done. |
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Re: Existing
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by Remy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:11:16 PM AEST
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man, reminds me of a few other unhappy folk... dreary, but the message is well-said.
-smelly_man! |
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