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My Jolly Party
Contributed by
youlied
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take the time
To consider me
"Let's all just be happy"
Your silent torture
Is killing me
"Oh we're all so happy"
I think I'll perish
And kill you too
"Isn't this just grand?"
We'll both be gone
When the night is through
But I have been dead
Much longer than you
Only then will you finally see
All the pain
You bring to me
Copyright ©
youlied
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2004-08-13 19:44:17]
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Re: My Jolly Party
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by waos on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:57:29 PM AEST
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| that was written really well, quite dark to think of killing someone else, but in all aspects of writing, it rocks. |
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Re: My Jolly Party
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:49:59 PM AEST
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Nicly written in a dark sorta way, to kill one self is harsh, but take another life is worse.
But you did an awesome job here.
Keep it up. |
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Re: My Jolly Party
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by free2you on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 05:33:44 PM AEST
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| I see so much suicide and murder on this site..oh well. I feel like killing most of the world at times..or going to live alone on another planet... |
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