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Abuse
Contributed by
rockshv
on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Corrode your mind
Detach free will
What’ yours is mine
Corresponds to fulfill
Activate you weakness
Shun me away
Just another cover
Then beg me to stay
Watch the eyes around you
As she runs away
Tackles her to the floor
“Kneel down and obey!”
Lock all doors behind you
Penetrates the steel walls
Silence the pedestrian
Beats her as she crawls
Overwhelms her senses
Outwit the ugly beast
Give me the rod
Ready to defeat
A murderous mind
Expects results
Soon she’ll realize
This was her fault
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rockshv
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2002-10-31 21:20:00]
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Re: Abuse
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:10:10 AM AEST
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| wow, this is a really emotive poem - the rhythm is really effective, powerful use of language. good job. xxx |
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Re: Abuse
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by rbp861 on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 11:57:27 PM AEST
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| very good |
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