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Perfect timing
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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He was my friend, he made me cry,
He made me want to quickly die,
an overdose would be the key,
I’d die alone, and no one would see,
He makes me feel this every day,
If not in words, then other ways.
My minds corrupted, tarnished and torn,
He’d be happy now if I were gone,
He confirmed my fears, the floors I possess,
Didn’t make me feel better, made me feel less,
Fell into the shade, the clouded black,
Forever to go and never turn back,
I’d use a knife but I wouldn’t give him that pleasure,
I’m scarred enough, no body to treasure,
Drug me up, and let me fall,
No pain will come, been through it all,
I want to die, I feel this pain,
I’m ready now, for my life to claim,
Hand me the tablets, lay me on my bed,
Close my eyes and watch my head,
The thoughts leak free,
I’m finally me,
The rains stopped pouring, the sun is shining,
My peaceful death was of perfect timing.
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2004-08-13 19:03:05]
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Re: Perfect timing
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:42:42 PM AEST
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Magnificent, striking, exquisite, beautiful, that’s all I
can say.
love always, dizza
xoxoxox |
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Re: Perfect timing
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by WestCPunk on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 08:35:47 PM AEST
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That was awesome I love the way you wrote it, lol i'm actually speechless it was that good....I feel like that at times although never went through with it but you never know one day i might not be here but i hope you're alright and know that there are people here you can talk to if you ever need anything!!
Much love,
Shelbi |
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Re: Perfect timing
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by pixie on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 10:28:35 AM AEST
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wow, an awesome write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Perfect timing
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:04:35 AM AEST
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a brilliant poem!
superb!
keep it up.
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Re: Perfect timing
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:41:55 PM AEST
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great write... all your poems are amazing...keep writing
lots of luv*allymp |
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