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Now It's All Over
Contributed by
rockshv
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Do you really care?
Am I all that you see?
I’ve paid my debts
In you I believed
Now it’s all over
This ain’t a game
Don’t like what I’ve got
Though I cant complain
I refuse to lose
Play another round
One more shot
Just pass me the booze
Taking it all in
Let my words shine
Call me your lover
I’ll shatter with time
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rockshv
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2002-10-31 21:20:00]
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Re: Now It's All Over
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetolbaby on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:09:50 AM AEST
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| it s reall good . you can really write |
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Re: Now It's All Over
(User Rating: 1 )
by rockshv on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 04:50:20 AM AEST
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thanks for the feedback!!!
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