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My emotions won't let me be
Contributed by
Luckycharm
on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:08:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My emotions won't let me be,
If your not willing to protect me,
I have been loving you for so long,
But sometimes I have visions that your gone,
I don't wan't to lose you because I will cry,
Last night I wondered if everything would be alright,
My emotions have not yet set me free,
And I live with a burden for all eternity,
I'm sad with cold tears flowing out of my eyes,
Help me to heal myself so I can realize,
That I need to let the hurt go,
And wash my heart and soul,
My emotions take over me,
It's like I'm not able to breathe,
Smiles come on my face and leave,
Because you are not beside me,
Yesterday I would not forget your face,
But today my mind wen't so blank,
My emotions keep on making me feel like I will die,
Another day of pain and continuous cries,
My nights have been lonely,
Cause I wish you were here for me,
So I can be set free,
My emotions won't let me be
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Re: My emotions won't let me be
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by pixie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:19:31 PM AEST
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a very well structured poem, you have expressed youf feelings very well and im sure alot of us can relate,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: My emotions won't let me be
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:21:38 PM AEST
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A good poem. Clearly felt. you already know what needs to be done though, " I need to let the hurt go,
And wash my heart and soul "
I find emotions easier to work with on paper than in my heart or head, keep writing. Let them out, let them go.
Nazmythian
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Re: My emotions won't let me be
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by Poe on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:29:04 PM AEST
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I can tell this was written from true feelings. When I read it, I could feel it. Even though I did not write this, It hits pretty close to what I feel too. Thanks,
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Re: My emotions won't let me be
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by Stitch on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:16:21 PM AEST
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You have encompassed the inward struggle that so many wage. Bravo for tackling and subduing such a difficult subject.
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Re: My emotions won't let me be
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:48:58 PM AEST
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i know how you feel my emotions run my life,
bi polar is what the doc says is wrong but i think it is because we start feeling so sorry for ourselves. |
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