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TIME'S GRAVE
Contributed by
Alina
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:04:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I stumpled upon my grave
Only I didn't know it was mine
Bound to lay by fate
Bound to death through time
My time was so short
But in my head so long
Time left me in a body bag
And my life sang a horible song
My grave was freshly dug
Layed with flowers everyday
Waiting for the time
When in it's tomb I would lay
Time sent me into a daze
Confused I lived my life
My grave always waiting
Time is so long.....But never long enough.
My clothes were always ready
The funeral and tears prepared
But time never made me ready
For my death that I feared
Stumbling upon my grave
I saw my name inscribed
Realizing I was a wondering ghost
Time had already taken my life.
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-08-13 13:04:30]
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Re: TIME'S GRAVE
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by pixie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:20:20 PM AEST
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ow this is amazingly written, there's nothing more I can say other than bravo...
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Re: TIME'S GRAVE
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:33:33 PM AEST
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That is incredible. If I was awakened by something like that, I would be scribbling all night long. Fantastic write.
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Re: TIME'S GRAVE
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:38:44 PM AEST
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Dang! This was Chilling but good! Christina |
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Re: TIME'S GRAVE
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:07:09 PM AEST
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really liked the line 'Time left me in a body bag' overall i think this is a superb poem - well thought out. superb.
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Re: TIME'S GRAVE
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:43:43 PM AEST
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i really loved this alina!i once had a dream similar to this,in my dream i was staying the night in an old house,when a ghost appeared
i fell in love with him,he started to die and fade,so i killed myself to be with him,only for him to die again and im left alone remembering the girl at the front of my dream that was screaming at me,i wouldnt listen,but it was myself warning not to kill myself,i thought thatone was kind of creepy!well im glad you are writing more how many site points do you have so far? |
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