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untitled
Contributed by
CaddishCut
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:45:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A black tear falls from her cheek
This happens 2 or 3 times a week
You watch as her make-up runs down her face
She's becoming a mental case
A case of unhappiness bottled up inside
A case of depression difficult to hide
A case of rage ready to explode
A case of bullsh*t handed to her in loads
She tries her hardest to seem happy
She does everything to please her family
All she is to them is a low life piece of sh*t
She failed at nothing again today, so she gets another hit
Away
Taken away from a chance at life
Away
Forced to grow up way before she was 5
Away
Don't matter that she's had it rough all her life
Away
Take her away before she takes her life
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CaddishCut
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2004-08-13 12:45:28]
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Re: untitled
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by pixie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:47:36 PM AEST
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this is a very upsetting piece, but a cruel and awful reality for many children out there... a very sad poem, you have written it well tho,
takecare
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Re: untitled
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by Poe on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:07:19 PM AEST
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Very powerful piece. Reminds me of a friend i used to have.
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