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Mr 9 MM
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:17:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Protects me in his own little way,
Everyone listens to what he has to say,
He is feared instantly on sight,
Fills your whole body with immense fright.
By my side is where he belongs,
Often heard reciting his loud song,
I aim, shoot & then I fire,
If anyone dares call Mr 9mm a liar.
I always keep him fully loaded,
He lays in wait to be goaded,
For someone to cross his path,
As he explodes he lets out a laugh.
He tells me when to squeeze the trigger,
So his ego can grow even bigger,
His smooth body wants to caress,
Penetrate his victim & make a mess.
The sight of blood gives him a thrill,
I am his puppet & I fire at his will,
People deserve to suffer death by lead,
He burrows deep inside your head.
I hope that Mr 9.mm doesn’t turn,
That in my demise he doesn’t yearn,
He once asked to put a bullet in my brain,
But that was back when I was insane.
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Re: Mr 9 MM
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by CaddishCut on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:34:44 PM AEST
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| Very cool! |
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Re: Mr 9 MM
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 03:38:37 PM AEST
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| Hun I loved this one..Your in sink.. |
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Re: Mr 9 MM
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by Alina on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 01:18:50 PM AEST
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I loved the last four lines!! Made me laugh in a way. I got the impression from your poem, that you think you're no longer insane according to your last lines but by the rest of the poem ..... your still crazy and don't realize it. Great Job!! I love all your poems.
ALINA |
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Re: Mr 9 MM
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 02:05:56 PM AEST
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| This is bad ***. Very creative |
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