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Hiden And Seek
Contributed by
Bjork_Pagan_Poetry
on
Wednesday, 10th July 2002 @ 02:00:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You write me the part of a fool
And you get the part of an angel
I know it isn't fair
But I'm not one to complain
I have my demons under control
And the biggest dragon has been slain
But every time I listen to you it's lies
All of them.
From when the time I walked your dog and you said she ran away
And the time when we were young and about what your elders say.
Why do you do this?!?
All the time!
I get used to sweet old you
When you bring me flowers and roses
Then you leave me in the fog
Maybe I should play hide and seek
Let me go and hide
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Re: Hiden And Seek
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 08:54:59 AM AEST
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Powerful and mature writing...well done
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Re: Hiden And Seek
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by OreO on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:32:28 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one
Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Hiden And Seek
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by trenikia on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:02:50 PM AEST
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| u can write some very intresting poems from what i've read. keep up the work |
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