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Contributed by
kitty_cat
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 10:18:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Thrown in the dustbin
Thrown in the dirt
Shut out from what your thinking
Like everyone else you've hurt
Thrown in the shadow
Thrown in the dark
Am i what your looking for?
Have i made the mark?
Thrown in your playbox
Thrown with your toys
Another mind to play with
Another of your boys
Thrown in a room
Thrown in a cell
I need to know how u feel
Did you fall for me as well?
Thrown away from you
Thrown out of your life
I end it here and now
As through my heart comes a knife
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2004-08-13 10:18:15]
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Re: Us
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 10:59:27 AM AEST
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Aww! lol I liked this, I don't think it's ******. Welcome to YPDC! Great write!
Katie |
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Re: Us
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by darkplaidbabe on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:11:38 AM AEST
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its not ***** at all!! this flows very well and your expression is great! i look forward to more! awesome write!
lovelovelove, Brynna |
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Re: Us
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by inoc on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:30:03 PM AEST
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you did well...
have fun writing more! |
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