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Would you? Could you?
Contributed by
kammie
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:42:20 AM in AEST
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Would you understand?
Would you hold my hand?
Would you wipe away a tear?
Would you hold me near?
Could you ever understand?
Could you hold my hand?
Could you wipe away a tear?
Could you hold me near?
Would you have a moment spare?
Would you say that you care?
Would you give all I need?
Would you give up any greed?
Could you have a moment spare?
Could you say that you care?
Could you give me all I need?
Could you give up any greed?
Would you tell me how much I mean?
Would you tell me what you've seen?
Would you stop me if I were to cry?
Would you save me if I were to die?
Could you tell me how much I mean?
Could you tell me what you've seen?
Could you stop me if I were to cry?
Could you save me if I were to die?
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Re: Would you? Could you?
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by inoc on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:57:54 AM AEST
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I like how you repeated each verse twice
it really puts the point accross....
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Re: Would you? Could you?
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by Dralion on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:06:30 AM AEST
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Almost sounds like song lyrics.
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Re: Would you? Could you?
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:08:02 AM AEST
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very powerful poem. Great questions to express your emotions.
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