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Tangled Puppet Strings!
Contributed by
inoc
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:41:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I have no authority anymore
my children hardly listen
what's their life instore
I give them a direction
for them to obey
but with wandering minds
and distant eyes
they forget I'm their mum today
not allowed to spank or shout
it's hard to be a parent
when their fathers not about
I'm the one left holding the strings
somehow they are tangled
the puppets are in the hands
of some other human beings
I feel usless and bad
why cant my children
obey their parents
like I once had!
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-08-13 06:41:39]
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Re: Tangled Puppet Strings!
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:58:53 PM AEST
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Testify Darlin !!! I see so much of the same thing every where. My kids have been brought up with a combination of their parents past. It is so different than when I was younger. As a step-father, that can certainly come into play as well. I certainly hope things have gotten better witth time.
A wonderful write. Thank you. I thought it was just me with that problem.
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Re: Tangled Puppet Strings!
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by suzie007uk on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:40:45 PM AEST
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| this is a poem that really pulls strings, children pull so many......... well written.......... suzie |
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