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If You Go....
Contributed by
x_midnight_x
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:02:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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if you go....this dog shall lose its bark,
the rain shall fall down day and night,
my life left in the dark
i would howl to the moon with all my might
sleep for short and eat no bite...
until your here and in my sight
if you go...
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x_midnight_x
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2004-08-13 06:02:32]
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Re: If You Go....
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by inoc on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:08:23 AM AEST
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this sounds like Patch my daughters dog!!!
nicely worded
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Re: If You Go....
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:13:19 AM AEST
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good poem. I like how you expressed what you needed to in a small amount of words.
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Re: If You Go....
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:31:29 AM AEST
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very well written great job.
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