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The Mirror
Contributed by
dartsofplsre87
on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:12:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Can you feel her?
Can you see the blushing beauty standing in the way?
She will take her time to discover her own voice.
Once she starts she will not stop.
She'll pick up her life that stands on a counter.
Can you see the metal top?
That is the release.
Once upon her skin, she will fall to the pits of a world so angry.
Can you see the bottom whose handle is black?
Neither can she as her eyes focus upon the cold steel in her warm blood.
There stands a girl before you who you do no recognize.
She is beautiful and happy.
Do you not recognize her?
She is you on the outside.
If she could see you she would see an empty pit of nothing.
No light
No darkness
just space
waiting to be filled with the blood dripping from her wrists.
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dartsofplsre87
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2004-08-13 04:12:37]
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Re: The Mirror
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by SkippysAm0r0n123 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:25:57 AM AEST
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Wow, Im 14 and about 3 months ago i was thinking of Suicied,I tired once but my mom cought me and said she was going to get me help, She watched over me 24/7, and i thought no one understood this is just how i felt it was just wow.like right on the dot .It's amazing.
~*~SkIpPY*~*~ |
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Re: The Mirror
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:33:33 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, dark but vey intriguing. This is a little different from other suicide poems I've read but that makes it all the more interesting to read. |
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Re: The Mirror
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by pixie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:05:59 AM AEST
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a very intruiging suicide write,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Mirror
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by kammie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:36:22 AM AEST
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| it sound's like me happy on the outside and unhappy inside my sister stopped me from suicide a few months ago thank god ! kammie xx |
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