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Life Is Like A Game
Contributed by
rbps861
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is like a game that we all must play
When we are born into this world the game begins
None of us not knowing how to play this game
As we go through life making choices that will affect our life
But learning as we go with each choice we make
We may make good moves; we may make bad moves
As we go though life not knowing how these choices
Will affect the game, that’s why it’s a gamble we take
Chances as we move though life not knowing how
Far to go with each course we choose, some of us may
Do very well, and some not so good
It’s just that we never know how far we will
Get playing this game of life and not knowing
That each and every move will determine how well
We’ve played the game, we no that every game
Must end, we just don’t know how or when
The Game will end.
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rbps861
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2002-10-31 20:20:00]
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Re: Life Is Like A Game
(User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:24:09 AM AEST
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| Just so you know I counted the word "life" in this poem 6 times. There are 17 lines in the poem. That's 6 if you don't include the title which of course is simply Life is a Game. Good concept rambles a bit. I'll give it a 2.9 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Life Is Like A Game
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by norticus on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:24:22 AM AEST
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| Just so you know I counted the word "life" in this poem 6 times. There are 17 lines in the poem. That's 6 if you don't include the title which of course is simply Life is a Game. Good concept rambles a bit. I'll give it a 2.9 on the Nortiscale. |
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