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the girl i love
Contributed by
justjames
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Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:24:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the girl i like is almost insane,
but the sound of this is music,
the way she does things blows my brain,
to others may seem useless
am i a fool to think this way,
will she ever see,
for now i will wait the day,
that our love will be
i want to tell her but can i, how?
it makes me feel twisted inside,
how much more will my feelings allow,
to sit and wait by the side
i’ve got to show her just how i feel,
in the perfect kind of way,
and even if she can not deal,
it is the thing i have to say
I love you ____ with all my heart,
you fill me up with joy,
and although our love may never depart,
this moment we can enjoy.
Copyright ©
justjames
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2004-08-13 00:24:08]
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Re: the girl i love
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by brokensoul on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:32:28 AM AEST
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" if you tell the he/she you love them they might break your heart. if you dont tell he/she you love them you might break theirs"
tell her you love her go for it if she rejects you HER DAMN LOSS! girls love poems give this to her and tell her its about her!! |
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Re: the girl i love
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by emystar on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:51:49 AM AEST
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Give her a copy of this write.
Very good writing.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: the girl i love
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:44:26 AM AEST
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(tear) i know a guy named James and i wish he felt this way about me.. lol nah i'll be okay. Good write it is really touching and i hope that you get this girl you long for.
Corrupted_minds
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Re: the girl i love
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:58:49 AM AEST
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if you dont tell her then she may get away and you will live out your life with what if? Sorry decissions is yours of course a reat write
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Re: the girl i love
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:08:08 AM AEST
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great write. I feel just like this.
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Re: the girl i love
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by dartsofplsre87 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:33:21 AM AEST
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| This is sweet. You should tell her. |
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Re: the girl i love
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by pixie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:15:52 AM AEST
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awwwww this is lovely, it's also quite sad as you say you can't tell her, I am sure if you told her she would want to have a read of your wonderful writes about her :)
takecare
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Re: the girl i love
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by TwEeK on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:42:28 PM AEST
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try your best, you just might catch her!
nice poem!
Tweek |
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