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I ask
Contributed by
notwhatitseems
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:41:53 PM in AEST
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What’s with this planet earth
Full of death full of birth
We all ask the same questions
Why do we die
Why do we live
We should all know the answer
We live to die and we die to live
I ask
Why are their so many with anger in their heart
Why do we never finish the things that we start
What’s withe this quest for happiness and joy
You know I think it’s all a ploy
To get us to succeed
Which is really only greed
Just to fit in
We must be beautiful and thin
We all want fame and riches
But we never stop to help those who live in ditches
Always thinking of our self
our self and no one else
So why do we live
I’ll tell you why we live
we live to give
And why do we die
We die when there is nothing left to give but what but what is left inside
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Re: I ask
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by TheRaven on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:07:33 AM AEST
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you really have an awesome talent...keep it up i enjoy your work, very thought provoking. i would almost label this poem 'emo', but that would be so stereotypical. great job all around.
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Re: I ask
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by soccerchic2011 on
Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 09:20:33 AM AEST
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