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Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:40:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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like the father who kills his son in body
you kill me in soul
like the crowd that ever surrounds you
i am never alone
like the mother that ignores her daughter
you chisel my heart
like the people that mock my feelings
you break me apart
like the brother who kills his brother in fields
you beat me to the ground
like the sister who murders you in words to friends
im kicked when im down
like the teacher who taught me my stupidity
you laugh at me to
like the pastor who damned me to the pits of hell
you slaughter my dreams
like the "best friends" i thought i had all these years
you mock my best intentions
like the world around me who hates the way i am
you cant accept my complications
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2004-08-12 23:40:51]
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Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams
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by WestCPunk on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:44:31 PM AEST
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That was pretty deep and i can relate to it a lot great job keep it up!
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Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams
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by emystar on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:07:37 AM AEST
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A bit sad but written well. I don't think too much of them preachers that damn u to hell either.
U r so rite that God luvs us as is.
Great job.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:07:07 AM AEST
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intense sad write I say to hell with all those ppl if they cant love you for just the way you are we all reach a crossroad in our life where we ask ourselves are these people really worth it? A great write!
Ps I told someone tonight to come over and take lessons from my dog on unconditional love that made them shut their face!
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Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:12:02 AM AEST
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this world is filled with many harsh realities.
welldone..k |
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Re: Drowning The Infants In Our Dreams
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by ArkAngelGabriell on
Wednesday, 9th March 2011 @ 08:09:02 AM AEST
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| Nice execution. Bravo |
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