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Pain

Contributed by Whitesoxgurly20 on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 09:49:51 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

One cutt away
Could end your life in just one day
Blood dripping down
No noise no sound
No one but you is around
Blood dripping on the ground
You cry in pain
You know you cannot keep doing this over and over again
But you still do it
In fear everyday
Praying that youll make it till tomorow
Searching to find when to stop maybe could stop today
Maybe could stop tomorrow
Will tomorrow come?
You wont know until you wake up feeling knumb
Inside and out
You wake up and everythings still messed up...WITHOUT A DOUBT!
You feel theres nothing left to do
So you pull out the knife
Start to cry as you run it across your arm
You think...until happiness comes
You will no longer feel this way, no more being knumb
Cold, you will be stronger and very bold
But weak inside
Knowing that you hurt yourself
And theres no turning back time
Get your head on your shoulders and straightin up your mind
Clean everything up
And throw away the knife
Your a stronger person
Stronger then you think
So now that your pain is gone
Dont ever do it again...

Copyright © Whitesoxgurly20 ... [ 2004-08-12 21:49:51]
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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:28:39 AM AEST
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your writing is so deep and painful. very well done though. i love the way you rhyme...so natural, no feeling of being forced. good job
the raven

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