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The Dance
Contributed by
Hugh
on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:32:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The Dance
This ache inside
Eats me alive
This pain just won’t subside
This fear of mine
Controls my life and haunts my soul
This fear of you
This fear of me
And of what
We could be
What are we?
What do you want?
And is it me?
So many questions
Trapped within my soul
I can’t think straight
I've lost control
Control of my life
Control of my heart
I lost control
Right from the start
I just want to be with you
But also want to pull away
And save my heart
Come what may
Life is a gift
Love is a chance
You can stand and watch
Or join the dance
Copyright ©
Hugh
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2004-08-12 18:32:15]
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Re: The Dance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:51:27 AM AEST
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Nicely written!
It takes courage to truly live, to be open enough and love someone, to put down your guard.
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Re: The Dance
(User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:00:54 AM AEST
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yeh not bad...
4 out of 5!
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