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Therapy
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Your beauty radiates from your body into my eyes,
Burning far and deep inside my mind,
Creating clouds of filth to hide what’s inside,
Your such a paradox baby, but what the hell am I
Your flesh smells so fresh, inspiring these thoughts,
Of body mutilation, of creating a decaying corpse,
These thoughts they remain deep inside my mind,
Tantalizing fantasy which to which you are blind
As my hand moves closer to touch your face,
You know surely that I’ll untie your lace,
To get inside what is hidden and mine,
My destiny is contained behind a moral line
These subjective thoughts deep inside my head,
Keep pumping me full of black blood until I see red,
But yet you seem so unaware, of all the perils,
Your mine, and you must always worship the pharaohs
A sudden grab of your throat, your eyes so wide,
So filled with fright, suddenly aware of my kind,
My hand has reached through that TV screen,
And before you know it, this knife has ruptured your spleen
Now I crawl inside the box, now all I hear is screaming,
I’m now caressing your frightened body, its bleeding,
Don’t worry this is all part of my self-designed therapy,
A CRASH COURSE IN INVASION OF PORNOGRAPHY
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alecfernadez
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2004-08-12 17:07:49]
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Re: Therapy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:00:26 PM AEST
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Bejesus! Back with a bang, I see, Alec!
I found your twisted take on porno (virtuality porno?) cool (like you said) and it definately casts a chill with vivid lines such as;
"Creating clouds of filth to hide what’s inside," and
"My hand has reached through that TV screen,"
That bit was so twisted and creepy, it reminded me of the film 'The Ring', which I found scary.
Welcome back.
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Re: Therapy
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by arden on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:28:27 AM AEST
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lol sorry but i find it kinda funny how it ended and such.
it was twisted and creepy though. really good write alec. i always love your writes and this was bloody amazing.
well done. keep it up.
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Re: Therapy
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:05:12 PM AEST
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I cant stand Dark Poetry, especially when it's bloody and gross.......where do you find these horrible thoughts? In your mind? I can't imagine anyone waking up with such horrible kinds!
Spooky too!
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