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How can you call yourself a friend?
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:42:20 PM in AEST
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How?
Can you say that you are a friend?
Are you a “player”, is it all just pretend?
Can
You please tell me just how you feel
Ignoring me now all the time, just isn’t real
You
Say you want to still be friends with me
So long as I, you do not have to see
Call
Me sometime and please explain
It's killing me here, or is this your plan?
Yourself
Have captured my children’s hearts
And now you’re tearing them apart
A
Small thing is now all I have asked
Don’t ignore the children, each time they pass
Friend
To them, you could still be
Even if, you still ignore me.
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2004-08-12 15:42:20]
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:52:40 PM AEST
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Ouch! The feelings of losing a friend are so sharp and clear. I can recall them myself. Fortunately, they pass. Children sometimes handle them better than we do. In the end, either the friendship is restored or a growth experience occurs. I hope you can work it out, but if you can't it's what we need to learn.
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:07:54 PM AEST
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I can so relate to this, Mick! It's as if they ignore you thinking you'll go away, or that you just don't hurt! But I know it does hurt. I like the way you've formed out the poem into an asking manner. It works real well! I hope your "friend"- for lack of a better word-"fool" would be much better- reads this and understands the PAIN she is causing!!!
Here's hoping your pain subsides soon!!!
((((((((Mick)))))))))
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:14:51 PM AEST
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I loved this format, Mick.... I wish it was a happier write tho.... cuz I know the pain you and the tribe are going through.
I'm so sorry it didn't work out....
Hugs to all...
Jen |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:18:07 PM AEST
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I just wrote a friendship poem. Only my second ever. And to the same person, too.
Sometimes its hard to be friends - I believe this person is afraid of something. Give their fear some time.
Good luck. |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:45:31 PM AEST
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so very sad...my heart goes out to the children most of all
Shari |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 08:36:13 PM AEST
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Mick I know this is tough for you especially seing your children hurt by this!
This happens all too many times I've seen it,they will strengthen from this as you will to,hang in there & give them hugs for me! Christina |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:00:00 AM AEST
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I love the style you have used here Mick.
I am sorry that your going through this though at times adults dont understand the measure of hurt they do afflict when children are involved its not right at all. I wish you all the best Im sending a huge hug to all of you.
Michelle |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by venkat on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:27:33 AM AEST
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| sadly touches the heart..very well expressed. venkat |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by pixie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:30:44 AM AEST
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Mick it's good to see you, but I wish that you had a happy write to share with us all. Graet style and from the heart.. I hope that things will work out for you in the near future, takecare
*hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 05:19:54 PM AEST
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That is a very unique format ... I like that and might perhaps expieriment with it a bit. Content was heavy with emotion. Very clear. I hope things work out in a healthy positive manner.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by inoc on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 06:33:52 AM AEST
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Your writes are so unique and
well written!
I feel for you and the children....
**Are you a Christian?
[if so] pray for his strength at this time***
and those that are on this site may also pray that want to and hope you are all okay
cheers!
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:03:04 PM AEST
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relationships are awful when it affects kids.. that sucks.
Great write though.
Oh I got my books today..:-) I should re-join as mary zayas..then if you do another book.. hmmmm. ????
Happy hollidays.. |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:24:08 AM AEST
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Another very sad but well written write.
Again I know the feelings well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: How can you call yourself a friend?
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by SocAstn on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 05:44:31 PM AEST
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Mick... i like this one a lot. Totally sucks that some people are like that. I really dig your writing man. Keep up the good work.
Austin |
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