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Is There Bliss In Suicide?
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:20:33 PM in AEST
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There is bliss in suicide,
But not for those left behind,
You leave them with a lifetime of whys?
You will not be around to see them cry.
Is killing yourself really the answer?
Do you have to make the devil your dancer,
Can there be another way,
To make you live for another day.
I once thought this was my destiny,
That this was the only way I’d be free,
To take my life & leave this world,
Never to witness the pain as it unfurled.
I am glad I found the strength,
To not give up & swim another length,
My life is now filled with love & joy,
No longer is my soul just a toy.
I cherish all that I have now,
When someone finally shown me how,
To love & let go of my past,
My ship now proudly carries a mast.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-08-12 12:20:33]
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Re: Is There Bliss In Suicide?
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by BrandySwanson on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:32:59 PM AEST
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this is so good
Is killing yourself really the answer?
I say hell no cause I've tried and it didnt solve the answers to my problems at all.
Brandy |
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Re: Is There Bliss In Suicide?
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:44:57 PM AEST
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| a lovely passionate piece of writing pixie - powerful piece with an important message :) |
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Re: Is There Bliss In Suicide?
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:06:49 PM AEST
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I agree.. this poem carries a very strong message.. good write, keep it up..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Is There Bliss In Suicide?
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by venkat on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:42:16 AM AEST
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I am glad that you have found your strength..
Aww..this poem has a beautiful message..
...this is a very good poem..love and hugs. venkat |
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Re: Is There Bliss In Suicide?
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by darkplaidbabe on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:28:07 AM AEST
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this one really made me think, awesome write! im so glad that you have found how to be strong and happy in life. it would be tragic to lose such a talented poet with such great potential for the world! send me a message if you ever neen anything !
lovelovelove, Brynna |
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